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Anonymous
22 Sep 2010 10:56PM

Fag. Sounds like a high schooler's imagination running wild. Wishful thinking I imagine. You have way too much time on your hands. Better to spend it hitting the books so that someday you'll be able to really write Erotic Fantasy. It's obvious from the progression of your tale and the pathetic grammar, you haven't read many books.

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